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Dear Alice
Dear Alice
What have you done?
You looked at your mother and pulled out a gun.
So tell me Alice dear what do you plan to do?
When your mother comes to?
She won't be pleased
Thats what I'll say
So run dear Alice
Back in you go
Back thru the mirror, to the land you know.
Back to the land of a dreamers home.
Dear Alice
Dear Alice
What have you done?
You looked at your reflection and pulled out a gun.
Now you no longer breath.
Now you no longer wake.
Now you sleep, for you shall never awake.
©2005-2009 ~spaec
:iconspaec:

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A poem i though just right now. felt really sad. so much stuff going wrong for my friends, so meet my little horror poem friend... Alice.

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:iconburning-asphyxiation:
wow i like it, its like alice in wonderland mixed with suicidalness a clever twist i like this alot well written too..

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little angel go away, devil has my ear today. he promised me some solace and a little peace of mind whatever just as long as i don't feel so...

...you don't see me at all...
:iconspaec:
thank you! ur very sweet

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"But I don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.

"Oh, you can't help that," said the Cat: "we're all mad here. "
:iconburning-asphyxiation:
heh thank you for writing good stuff heh and thank you for thinking i am sweet :)

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little angel go away, devil has my ear today. he promised me some solace and a little peace of mind whatever just as long as i don't feel so...

...you don't see me at all...
:iconspaec:
=)

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"But I don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.

"Oh, you can't help that," said the Cat: "we're all mad here. "
:iconneolestat:
emotive words and i cool poem. i like :D

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*sighs* "Take your thumb out of the cat Andy..."
:iconspaec:
thank you very much!

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Alice

* "Into the hole again, we hurried along our way, into a once-glorious garden now seeped in dark decay."

* "If it's my keen invention you'd like to destroy, I'll withstand your best shot; I've got the right toy."
:iconneolestat:
you're very welcome :D

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*sighs* "Take your thumb out of the cat Andy..."
:iconsilkyfuzz:
Oh, this is such a nice little poem, I like its sing-song quality combined with the dark theme. Nice.
:iconsilverrose22:
oooh this gave me shivers , i love the short and sweetness of it all ^^ good work X3 !!

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